2) Author has included a massive wall of text with little structure. No headings or sections. Makes it harder to get through it.
3) Most important of all, the author does not provide a clear link to the site of the person he is criticizing. This makes it harder for third parties (us) to evaluate his claims.
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2) Author has included a massive wall of text with little structure. No headings or sections. Makes it harder to get through it.
3) Most important of all, the author does not provide a clear link to the site of the person he is criticizing. This makes it harder for third parties (us) to evaluate his claims.