So, some other thoughts along the "aha" factor on the page:
For, the "Why Use Ramamia?" section alongside the video, there are some points here that don't fit IMO:
"Get started for free in under 5 seconds" - That's not a reason to use the app. I wouldn't place this in the why section.
"Easily share photos, events, messages, and interesting links" - How? Can you tell me how in one a line point?
"10x easier to use than other family sites" - Again, how? Also, what's a "family" site in this sense?
"More private than using Facebook or MySpace" - Just covering all areas here, but do you think your target audience will know FB and MS well enough to showcase it here in this point?
"Add something and your entire family is updated" - Maybe say "anything" instead of "something" here. "Add ANYTHING and your entire family is updated IMMEDIATELY"?
For, the "Why Use Ramamia?" section alongside the video, there are some points here that don't fit IMO:
"Get started for free in under 5 seconds" - That's not a reason to use the app. I wouldn't place this in the why section.
"Easily share photos, events, messages, and interesting links" - How? Can you tell me how in one a line point?
"10x easier to use than other family sites" - Again, how? Also, what's a "family" site in this sense?
"More private than using Facebook or MySpace" - Just covering all areas here, but do you think your target audience will know FB and MS well enough to showcase it here in this point?
"Add something and your entire family is updated" - Maybe say "anything" instead of "something" here. "Add ANYTHING and your entire family is updated IMMEDIATELY"?