It looks like a good idea. You guys should hire a copywriter with good English, though. You're not conveying the idea laconic enough.

Guys, there's still lots of opportunities in the cloud storage market. Dropbox, for example, recently began to hunt enterprise customers and Box has been doing it (very) successfully for a while.

Cheers, gogojo, and enjoy your free space! Pls share a few more details what you found confusing?

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